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    Help with a character

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    tlegg

    Number of posts : 10
    Registration date : 2010-08-16

    Help with a character

    Post by tlegg on Thu Sep 09, 2010 12:19 am

    Hi every one, I need your option on a character,
    I need to know if you think he’s a Mary sue, I’ve tried the litmus test but I'd like to know what you guys think

    Phillip
    Age 17
    Has lived a life somewhat of hardships, being forced to hide underground with the rest of a non hypnotised humanity, hiding from an evil group that rules earth,

    Has lost a mother figure has a few friends,

    At first in the story he’s filled with hate, but as the story goes on his lessens a big, and finds a way to forgive those who have hurt him,

    Technically has ties to Isabella but is only featured in a few scenes with her.

    In an upcoming story only featured in 6 out of 13 potential chapter
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    Shwoo

    Number of posts : 21
    Age : 28
    Location : Canberra, Australia
    Registration date : 2010-09-02

    Re: Help with a character

    Post by Shwoo on Thu Sep 09, 2010 11:34 am

    He might be a Stu if:
    -Things always go right for him
    -He bends the rules of the universe just by existing
    -Everyone immediately loves him

    I think those are the only things that really make a Mary Sue character, but I can't tell if you have those things or not. From your description, he seems fine to me.

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